Failure? No way! But it could be improved.
The 'jumps' could be higher, and it seems the second one is shorter than the other 2.
These jumps are a stress to the poor alien's body: show this. At least, his head might come down a bit at each jump, and go up during the fall. Just like in an elevator!
And, if you're ambitious, give him a changing look, maybe during the fall?
thanks for the critique it help XD I will redo it... and I will tell u after I redo it, I really like it though but my friend said the alien looks scary so I replace it with other fersion you can see it here
and the angry version can be found at here but it haven approved yet I think
thanks for the helpfull critique always XD