Shading - I dont see why they need more shading.
Dog - true. he looks strange.
hands - its not a big problem, but maybe make the perspective-style consistent for all characters. Which doesnt mean copy-paste.
Just please dont fall into the standard stupid J-RPG art dogma "everyone must look the same, stand the same ...". Would be wrong and boring.
hmm, especially in the clothes and in the blond hair, but I meant more contrasting than shading.
EdJr- Thank you for your comment , can you specify what parts do you think need more shading? thanks .
DanielHyaku- Thank you for your comment, I take into account your corrections to do better next time, thanks for your coverage
Very good, I just see the things like Hyaku. And I would like to see more shading in some parts.
I'm feeling a big difference between the two arms of the last two characters. The one turned to the screen looks way too big in comparison to the other.
The first character looks like he is leaning forwards. And the dog looks like he has a whole lot of legs XD
I like the style of the characters. I think you're on the right track.
Good work.
I especialy like that despite being tiny, they all have different figures and stances.
I´m agree with Riva, maybe is better more variation, but otherwise beautiful designs, the worst maybe is the first character.