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Mockups are so much fun. I love this. You've done a great job creating atmosphere here. The only critique I have is that your textures are aren't very connected and fluent with each other. Looking at the 3 colors you have for the rocks, you should definitely add another. There is nothing wrong with using more colors =] The purpose of color restricting is to keep the art looking clean and precise, but if you restrict it to much you are limiting your creative compacity with the work itself. This piece has so much potential. Again though, the atmosphere is beautiful and I love the bright blue sky. You've definitely mastered my color choices =]
Nice work.
General textures seem sloppy, but it's a nice forest's atmosphere.
Looks good overall. The bridge is really messy tho. You have a stry white pixel in the right most tree.
Leaf patterns have been noticeably copy/pasted on every tree. This looks really sketchy. The grass to ground part looks neat. Trunks are very odd and feel quite mishapen like the leaves as well. The mountain in the back makes no sense when you can see a canopy of leaves at the top. What is holding them up? I think you should have worked on this a bit more before submitting it because it really feels incomplete to me.
The ground is wonderful but I have to agree with Jabber about the trunks. The tree on the far left has a pretty good trunk however the third one (the pale one) seems much too straight and sticks out.
The ground and the leaves are gorgeous in this one. I also like the character. The tree trunks don't look good to me though, and the footbridge is a little messy.
