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I think you should have kept the smile going in the actual piece, like you have in the preview. She doesnt look very happy about being naked.
I always love your color choices snice they are far away from what I usually see, though they don't work well with dithering on this peice.
The anatomy looks quite right at the moment except what Stickman says. Those 3 long straight lines in the right leg could change a little.
Nice. The leg that is raised - I feel that the thigh having such a straight line makes it feel a little off form. Maybe have it curve a little?
{ Thanks a lot cure and chris for the edits! I tryed to reach the middle point of your critics. Hope its better now.
And chris, I love the way you made she smile! ;)
Thanks guys!
nice work, but here are some of my suggestions:
http://imgur.com/szO0A
i tweaked a bit of everything, you many notice i toned down the cheekbone highlight, made the forearm longer, brought her breasts up a bit, the shape of the leg etc.
hope it helps!
I really kinda like this better than some of the other female form nudes on the site BECAUSE the body looks real. As stated below by Solrac, not all women have silicone looking breasts. I think it's beautiful. Faved!
the torso anatomy feels a bit wonky. great rendering though, 'specially around the face and hair.
sloppy anatomy edit. length of the legs and arms were also adjusted. reality is probably somewhere between yours and mine, would have to see the ref to really know what's what.
{ I did use a photo as reference, so I'm sure about the proportions.
Great work, very smooth and realistic. Pixel ladies don't necessarily have to look like barbies with silicone breasts.
Her proportions look a bit odd. Her body looks old and saggy. O_O
Pode criar algo referente a Uma Cilada para Roger Fabbit ou Pulp Fiction? Tá lindo.
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Cool